***WARNING*** Sexual Content Inside
Still censored.
I have mixed feelings about this. It's weird, imagining that this drawing is going to be used as fappage material, If I post it. And, to be honest, it's kinda exciting at the same time (not in that way). There's just something that makes me want to draw more like this.
Still, I'm not sure if this is the direction I want to take with my art...
enough rambling, though, just enjoy the picture... Uhhh I don't think I will be releasing the uncensored version.
I actually really like this so far! I've been debating myself whether or not to dabble into some more *cough* uh... you know...
But really looks nice so far! I love the way you drew her breasts. ^^
Here is some critazisum its not done wich is not good
Still looks prity good your art is realy good
Finish it, but I say fix her left arm, it looks a little to curvy. Like she has no bones, add another finger to the right hand and then send it to me on msn when it's done.
It also looks like, with the breast in the way that the left arm has a huge fat flab.
I dunno I just haven't been looking into the picture for more than first glance face value. XD
Anyways critique wise:
Her left (our right) eye is bit too far to the right.
As bman pointed out her right (our left) arm looks sort of like a noodle.
Her left (our her right) breast needs to be pushed down and the nipple moved. Or move up the other breast and re-size it slightly.
If she were to turn around now one breast would be higher than the other and her nipples would be all herp durpy.
If we're going to by realistic proportions her head seems too big for the rest of her, but it's animu so we won't worry about that.
Her head neck and shoulder aren't centered, and no one's clavicle is above their left breast. It should and will always be right above the sternum.
When you remove the clavicle line, you'll notice her head isn't centered on her body.
Because of those two reasons her torso, breasts, and shoulders don't match.
You also might want to move her nose slightly lower down.
It should be also noted that it'd make more sense if her hands were closer to each other, because unless she's holding a really long but skinny penor it doesn't really look right.
You also forgot the eyebrows again.
Oh wow, I actually really like the realistic shape of her breasts.
So much nicer than that gross over inflated ready to pop balloon look that a lot of Hentai goes for.
:are you for real :thanks for bringing this back up to the top
Oops, I didn't realize I was necroing this. :/
This forum needs more active art posts. Boo.
since the tsuna incident, it's been really dead...
Uncensor this and draw more porn.
Everyone here should draw porn also and we can have gallery contests.
if we had an art contest, Cloey would be the winner every time.
D